Hey, what do you think of this poem?

My only suggestion is pockets so wide...I think you could use a different more visual word than 'so' and improve the line and the stanza as well. For example I first thought bulge wide, but not that so I thought swing wide as if it were a long trench coat he wore and his pockets full of coal would make the jacket swing from the weight when he moves. I leave it to your duscretion and I will add thta the poem is phenomenal. You are so unique in your choices of subject as well as word usage and it gives an exotic and vivid nuance to your imagery. Oh I was lovechild firecat and I believe i had just started to get to know your work the a troll with aheavy finger reported too many of my questions and my acct got suspended. I am fighting it but for now, I am here in a friend's acct.